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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-05-01 06:47 AM

Our Mutual Beginnings

Filling up those spaces
With thoughts of my own
More of the threads
To the story had grown

Collective adventures
Gathered in my memory
Forming the pictures
In my thoughts frequently

Dream reflected glows
That held my fascination
The visions you share
Opens up my imagination

In tomorrows chapters
Forevermore you will be
There when I'm writing
Within thoughts intimately

Dreams and memory
From pensive to exciting
Thoughts I rendezvous
Giving reasons for writing

Our mutual beginnings
Being there from the start
Embracing in fantasy
Yet friends heart to heart

Hope©2003

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-05-01 07:20 AM

This is touchingly beautiful dear Hope.
Shared inspiration!
Love, Margherita

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-05-01 07:29 AM

Hope, I truly love to read your poetry. I'm
always glad to see you here.
This poem is no exception. I especially liked
this part....

In tomorrows chapters
Forevermore you will be
There when I'm writing
Within thoughts intimately

Dreams and memory
From pensive to exciting
Thoughts I rendezvous
Giving reasons for writing

Of course, it reminded me of me and my Honey-Love.

Hugs,

Ethel

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

3 posted 2003-05-01 10:10 AM

Beautifully written it flows nicely. Very romantic

Julie

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-05-01 10:13 AM

HopeS
A lovely write, enjoyed.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

5 posted 2003-05-01 11:23 AM

Beautiful thoughts Hope.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2003-05-01 11:31 AM

Thank you all for your kind thoughtful replies , much appreciated
Hope
hey Bridgette the person in my poem lives in Oregon too

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

7 posted 2003-05-08 01:41 PM

"Our mutual beginnings
Being there from the start
Embracing in fantasy
Yet friends heart to heart"

Great poem Hope! Loved this!

quatro

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