»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #26
»
Dancing With You(Promise #1..tag..you're it)
| Open Poetry #26 |
|
Dancing With You(Promise #1..tag..you're it) |
|
|
Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
|
Remember our promises ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ in the quiet room of a love song we find ourselves solving the problem of missing one another. Every note speaks a different language and every emotion has a scent and it rubs off when our lips close the distance between a kiss and a mere brushing of skin. We made a promise one love song a day and we will close the door in the face of the world and live only in quiet rooms together where tenderness does not fade but gets brighter with each repeat of each chorus in every song. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
in the quiet room of a love song we find ourselves solving the problem of missing one another I relate to this one, too. My Love and I have so many "favorite" love songs. We are always telling each other to listen to this or that new one.  Hugs, Ethel |
||
|
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
fine-well thought out write gal....I too think of old love songs...like, "Does Your Chewing Gum Lose It's Flavor On the Bedpost overnite?"....My boomerang won't come back, Guitarzan, Purple Haze, Blue Moon etc..... [This message has been edited by Toerag (05-01-2003 08:15 AM).] |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully written Jenn. A love song a day....wonderful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Songs, sung together, are always best. Thank you. Peace is the only battle worth waging. |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
these are the best kinds of songs. . .and yes, they're my favorite. . . great job. . .  --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
|
JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Yes indeed, another fine peice of work, getting better and better all the time dear one. I love the direction you are heading and cannot wait to enjoy the journey with you.  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
||
|
Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
love always stay in tune Great read here! |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jennifer very nice indeed . . . beautiful write xxoo |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Temptress - your writing is as of before, full with your thoughts... BC |
||
|
kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
in the quiet room of a love song we find ourselves solving the problem of missing one another. when our lips close the distance between a kiss and a mere brushing of skin i dig the creativity and the kewl lines in this piece |
||
|
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Your poem was not only noteworthy, it struck a chord with me as well... A very melodius piece! I will stay tuned for more... Richy |
||
|
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned!! Charisma |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
