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Candle
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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 Is our love like a candle, let us explore the ways. Do we still glow in each others eyes as the candle glows, Do our hearts flicker when we see each other like the tip of flame. Or is our love slowly dripping down to a puddle below like the wax of the candle. Have we still the warmth and glow like the candle burns or has a breeze blew out the flame. It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautiful metaphor |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
Nicely done! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite nice.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to think about it before it happens...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
QjQ, this is a really pretty poem. If you are speaking from personal esperience, I hope that your love last forever and never does this... Or is our love slowly dripping down to a puddle below like the wax of the candle Hugs,  Ethel |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
You're right, to describe love as a candle! As it is a simple little thing that produces much warmth and provides much light in out hearts. Yet, the wax of a candle hardens up after being burnt by the flames of passion. And a candle can be short-lived when the wax is all melted and the wick is used up. Surely love is not like this...  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful! .... you must know the answer to your question, but just in case remember you can always lit a new candle ...just develop enough warmth in your heart and you will mirror it in your partner's eyes. Love, Margherita |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece, I enjoyed it alot , thankyou Julie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, from what I can see, the flame is still burning strong!  ~ May the light never go out on your love... Warm hugs, EA |
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