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CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2003-04-30 03:25 PM

One Day

Should just one day but live again;
But one day of the thousands flown;
-- Be it the day my eyes had lain
Upon You -- the Queen on Beauty's throne.

Should I only one day choose --
But one to last eternal while
-- The one You did my shield defuse;
The day I yielded to your smile.

If a single day my World should reign --
The day our hearts had become one;
Those days, my Love, shall one remain --
-- One I greet with the rising Sun.

CG

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-04-30 03:29 PM

CG, Welcome to Passions! Another romanticist...can't have too many here in the Halls of Passion...

Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-04-30 03:34 PM

Oh I love romantic tales....
Hope to read more such as these from you!!!
Enjoyed and WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-04-30 03:34 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Absolutely breathtaking first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

4 posted 2003-04-30 03:35 PM

What a great poem! The person of whom you speak is a very lucky person to have someone to love so romantically.

Very Passionate! Thanks for sharing.
quatro

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-04-30 03:43 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww. this is lovely, sweet friend, may you and your love always live happily ever after in joy, this is a wonderful debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love.
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-30-2003 03:43 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-04-30 04:16 PM

Very nice...James

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2003-04-30 04:51 PM

Enjoyed your first post !!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

8 posted 2003-04-30 04:52 PM

nice write

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

9 posted 2003-04-30 04:57 PM

Beautiful first post.

Welcome to Passions.

Sunkissed.

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

10 posted 2003-05-01 02:16 AM

Thank you everyone for such a warm and inviting welcome - you have made my day.

Yes, the Romantics are my favourite poets, and I do prefer to write in meter and rhyme (or at least, make an attempt to...

).

Again, thank you, and look forward to reading the many great poems posted here.

CG

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