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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle 
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Hearing for the first time the lull, hurting my ears yet a welcome pain, for I am alive and unsaid words can not change the silence. Is a golden sunset beyond my reach, one so bright as to overshadow the night? While the darkest hour may be without sound, I am not without. And then my heart raced like the bubble in champagne to the top of the glass, and it burst open, tickling my nose and it listened again. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
And then my heart raced like the bubble in champagne to the top of the glass, and it burst open, tickling my nose I enjoyed your poem!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful words to ponder and read again. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Dorene, this is lovely, sweet friend, there are so many things better left unsaid but there are many times just seeing the spark in ones eye or the smile on ones face you know EXACTLY what they're thinking, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dorene, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Thank you, my poet friends, for visiting, reading, enjoying. When you think you have heard it all, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Is a golden sunset beyond my reach, one so bright as to overshadow the night? I would hope that it is within the reach of each of us. I actually live in the "unsaid" *s M |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Some silences are maddening, I know. Thanks for peeking in, M. When you think you have heard it all, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's the way to rise above it, with the bubbles, all the way to the top. Nice write Chanson~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Hearing for the first time the lull, hurting my ears yet a welcome pain, for I am alive and unsaid words can not change the silence.' Love this Dorene! Nice to read you again.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...for I am alive and unsaid words can not change the silence. ~*~ Ah...the sounds of a poet... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dorene, I read this three times, the third because I love it so much... Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
BluesSerenade-- Thanks! Yup. I might as well ride them and enjoy the ride. Duncan-- Thank YOU and it's lovely to hear from you! Sunshine-- I am pleased you enjoyed the sounds! Thanks! Pat-- Three times thank you! Chanson When you think you have heard it all, |
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