Open Poetry #26 |
You Become A Part Of Me |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I drift upon a sea of sorrow I'm lost in my loneliness But I am comforted by nature And feel the waves soft caress I see a ship out in the distance And I am drawn to its light The dolphins help to guide me As the day turns into night The seas begin to calm As the moon comes into view And as I reach the vessel I am in total awe of you I toss my troubles to the wind As you take me in your arms And as the moon shines like a beacon I surrender to your charms As we dive together recklessly Into this sensual sea You explore my hidden treasure And become a part of me * * * "If I never met him I would have dreamed him into being" I am in motion |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely thoughts and pic Sue - enjoyed this to-night very much. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - you write with romance in your heart, I can tell... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, love hope sall things as the great proverb says and I truly wish for true happiness to always singin you and bring you clear sailing from here! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Oh Geez - you almost made me believe in fairy tale love again with this piece. I say ALMOST! LOL! Gorgeous picture to go with this, as usual! Such a breathtaking poem, I couldn't read it fast enough to find out what HAPPENED at the end! Just the way I like them - good enough to make me *sigh*... A beautiful way to end my night! THANKS! ~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I want to come for a ride in your chariot!! I've never met anyone with so much love in the heart and soul. You are truly amazing and this was truly beautiful. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Beautiflly romantic and fanciful! Betty Lou Hebert |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
I really, really, really enjoyed this! I am left speechless.... quatro |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
This is wonderful. It left me speechless. thank you so much for sharing this with us. |
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