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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-04-29 04:05 PM

No, I’m not the one
who walked out the door
and threw the keys
into the deepest end of the lake.

Why is it you
cannot recognize
true beauty,
preferring only to see the beast?

You always said
she was only a memory
and that one broken heart
was already one too many.

Seems as if you
forgot the old golden rule
of relationships,
the UNTO OTHERS one.

No, I’m not the one
who walked out the door
and tossed away
the keys to her heart.

***
(no, this isn't about me)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-04-29 04:11 PM

"No, I’m not the one
who walked out the door
and tossed away
the keys to her heart."

Wow!! Powerful write here Kacy!
Someone sounds pretty angry...
glad it isn't you.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-04-29 04:32 PM

Yep, glad it's not me this time, Nancy. But it did happen to a friend, who never saw it coming. It's the sad side of love.
thanks for reading

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-04-29 05:14 PM

A sad tale...very nicely told.
Great job.
Eric

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-04-29 09:08 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting, Eric.
Yes, it was a sad scene.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-04-29 10:13 PM

well written

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

6 posted 2003-05-01 12:32 PM

Damn. Love this.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-05-01 08:04 AM

"Seems as if you
forgot the old golden rule
of relationships,
the UNTO OTHERS one."

Kacy you say it!
This is powerful.
Love, Margherita

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2003-05-02 01:25 PM

And you look about, and wonder...Who isn't somewhere in this write?

I, alas, Have been that one.

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