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Against The Grain
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Against The Grain |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Your Sweetness, fresher than newly blossomed spring betrays my heart utterly, bitterly with this longing I beg you, do not smile for me nor term me endearing for I have sworn an oath that frees me of your beauty Your eyes make mockery of my resolve intensely burning beacons ever guiding whenever I am fortunate enough to forget Please, release this tortured soul Let me be as stone to you A sculpture untouchable, unreachable Here is where this love shall remain Forever memorialized... Sunkissed. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
*Please, release this tortured soul very good lines!! nice write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's good to know when to let it be and walk away, than to perpetuate something that can never be. Memories give way to the hearts silent keep, Much enjoyed your thoughts Sunkissed~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bluesy said it well... memories give way to the heart's silent keep. Well done. TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gracious....look at you, inspiring bluesy with the words to a new poem....  s of the first degree! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you, QJQ, Blues  , TD, and Sunshine...*hugs to you all*  Sunkissed. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
brilliant! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sunkissed, The title says so much. The poem, I read three times and it touched me deeper each time. I love this. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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