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Rhythm of Hearts
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Rhythm of Hearts |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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Our hearts were out of tune with only thoughts of singing like the birds. And then our thoughts came together by a mystic song of music. The tunes were sweet and the rhythm, we entwined together. Our hearts danced to a new tune of music that had been dormant. As we danced, the days and the weeks became months. We believed our hearts had found the right tune. The expressions of your face glowed like a full moon. The twinkle from your eyes was like magic from the night sky. Your hair flowed in the gentle breeze, like a flowing stream rippling along the path we strolled. Now, our hearts are dancing to the rhythm of love. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked the rippling effect! So pretty, this path you're on. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A line from a poem of mine.... "A step in step in time with mine" That's what it reminds me of!!!! Very nice....I'm a hopeless romantic and eat these love poems up!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Yet another beautiful piece of writing that was so much enjoyed. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Don't know HOW I could have missed this one! It is delightfully romantic! Very special! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
QjQ,such beautiful work it is a great love poem  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely romantic piece, So beautiful and full of emotion Julie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
swaying... |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
Terrific!!!! |
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