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J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

0 posted 2003-04-28 07:51 PM

In a pit of darkness
Hides all that was good N me
Left behind is the anger
Anger that scares even me

In the demise of my heart
What is bitter is left behind

Consuming me
Becoming me
Is me
Always me

All that remains
Is Pain

"Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin
[This message has been edited by J. K. Mitchell (04-28-2003 07:55 PM).]

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2003-04-28 07:53 PM

This poem has a great feeling of emptiness...my heart goes out to any who feel this way...

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-04-28 08:36 PM

Pain runs deep and leaves us in the darkness....
Hope you find the light in the darkness. Take Care!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-04-28 09:16 PM

A well expressed heartache.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-04-29 04:20 PM

Many times...James

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2003-04-29 10:44 PM

well written my friend

wishing you happy today..

hugs, g

"If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-04-30 04:10 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Jacqueline, I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, I know this feeling but know you have many who care for you! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jacqueline, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

7 posted 2003-04-30 04:51 PM

su corazon es bueno!

My sentiments exactly!

quatro

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

8 posted 2003-05-09 04:23 PM

Girl this is deep. Who knew such a short poem could express such sooooo much. I've been there many times.

"Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin

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