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A Step Of It
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A Step Of It |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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A Step Of It I liked it much better when I listened to your love songs but the only tune I hear now is the blues I remember a time when you left me breathless before we ever touched the dance floor and maybe those were the pink days where I still had something worth dreaming about when I close my eyes now I can still feel you as you took off my shoes and rubbed my feet before the music started laughing saying that you couldn't dance but this night could be pink and if you did this now I wouldn’t miss a step of it but the blues play on [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (04-28-2003 06:54 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
reminds me of 30 years ago or so.... you do these so well Helen *s M |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this speak volumes. The heart unmasked and filled with tender beauty. Eric |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A good poem shows you; an excellent poem takes you there and makes you part of it. Hope I didn't step on your foot..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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