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Open Poetry #26

Chrysalis

MysticDreamer
Member

since 2003-04-21

Posts 131

0 posted 2003-04-28 06:43 AM

Chrysalis

I'm losing my identity
Far beyond the defined
Drifting into a deep sleep
Within a clearer mind

Releasing past failures
Guilt and future fears
Removing all the barriers
Built up through the years

Renewing possibilities
In peaceful restoration
Finding at one moment
A point of transformation

Restless changes beginning
Moved by feelings of flight
I'm drawn toward an opening
Into the world of light

Awakining new and free
My soul and spirit sings
With the love for the moment
Flying away on Dream Wings

[This message has been edited by MysticDreamer (04-28-2003 09:05 AM).]

poetSeaMaiden
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 107

1 posted 2003-04-28 09:26 AM

Really, really beautiful! This had a fresh breath of "new hope" in it! I love how it kept building until the end, where it opened up into a "happy day!" *big sighs* Really nice!

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-04-28 09:35 AM

The up-lifting final stanza was a breath of fresh spring air!

Happy spring!
EA

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-04-28 09:38 AM

Uplifting with a sense of renewal. Happy you! Liked the last line.
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-04-29 05:30 AM

This is a wonderful poem, so uplifting and healing.
Love, Margherita

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