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Open Poetry #26

Apprentice of Love

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-04-27 12:40 PM

Apprentice of Love

Receive me as your apprentice
of love.
Let me into your heart to stay.
I will give all the sweet kisses
and hugs until I learn
to give them with love from my
heart; Love you shall cherish.

Let me be the glow to guide you
through darkness and traumas.
I will respect you always and honor
you with communication,
when I have achieved the love you
cherish.
Will you make me your journeyman
of love?

"It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-04-27 05:14 PM

Do they really have an apprenticeship for love...who would teach it? James

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-04-27 06:39 PM

Beautiful.
Eric

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2003-04-28 12:20 PM

Your words keep me coming back....it's like a familiar song being sung. Very nice!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-04-29 02:59 PM

nicely done!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2003-04-29 08:19 PM

Wow!! This was fabulous and so very well written.

"Love.....'tis second life,
it grows into the soul,
warms every vein, and
beats in every pulse"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2003-04-29 10:29 PM

woohoo! thats a good one!

hugs, g

"If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

7 posted 2003-04-29 10:35 PM

I'll bet you win kudos for that one>> good read.
thanks for sharing.

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