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Dont hurt me
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Dont hurt me |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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as a child i experienced being bullied. this is my first ever poem. i know its not great but i wanted to share it with you ..... hugs june x ---------------------------------------- Dont hurt me deep, deep, deep at the bottom of my soul, you'll find a door, a tiny hole. its leads to where i collect and keep, the darkest cuts that make me weep. for if i kept them just anywhere, then they would know how much i care. so when they hurt me you won't see, the way their words are affecting me. and i can smile and call their bluff, my tears won't show, i am hurt enough. but every word of cutting kind, is there for me to bring to mind. so don't you think, i have forgotten' just how much their souls are rotting. one day, you'll see the the tables turned, and every hurt they will have earned. so never doubt that i have heard, i am storing every single word. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
june, this is a wonderful write...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
June: Welcome to PIP! For a first write - pretty damn good I know these walls and those words One day . . . they will fade amazing xxoo |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thank you both. this is not my first poem on passions but the first i ever wrote. its a long time ago so i no longer feel this way but i didnt want to change it because its the first... soppy eh ? thanks again, hugs n stuff from june x |
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