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Open Poetry #26

Short Moods 4

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

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0 posted 2003-04-27 02:18 AM

The other three are in Open 25 if anyone cares to find them.
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Your love is air
and my heart is alive
because it breathes you.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

[This message has been edited by Temptress (04-27-2003 02:21 AM).]

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-04-27 02:42 AM

This is really nice~

Breathe easy Temptress~

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-04-27 03:22 AM

Short and straight to the point, love is more vital than oxygen to truly LIVE

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-04-27 07:06 AM

Exactly

this is the most lovely
thing I have read in a long
time

without that air we
wither on the vine
amazing
xxoo

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2003-04-28 10:30 AM

It is that breath that keeps that love, and that heart, alive.

Thank you.

Peace is the only battle worth waging.
--- Albert Camus

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

5 posted 2003-04-28 10:48 AM

enjoyed

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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Georgia

6 posted 2003-04-28 02:39 PM

nicely done!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-04-28 02:58 PM

I use to feel this way...maybe I will again. nice to see your words, always
*s
M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-04-28 04:22 PM

Enjoyed...James

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