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Open Poetry #26

Beauty fell

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

0 posted 2003-04-26 11:46 PM

Burning candles run out of wick,
To some people, beauty is sick.
The songs that once were played are hushed,
To some people beauty means a whole bunch.

Beauty fell.
Humans yell.
All is not well.
What is that smell?

The sunsets have disappeared,
The birds that once chirped, chirp no more.
Life is general has stopped growing,
Tears fall from the sky as rain.
Beauty fell.

It seems your heart wants to stop beating.
Your arms have turned red, are they bleeding?
Thunder booms all the time.
Everyone seems to have lost their mind.

Beauty fell.
Humans yell.
All is not well.
What is that smell?

Is there a price to pay for beauty?
Lightning starts a fire,
There's no beauty to drown in.
Beauty fell.

The sky all the sudden decided not to be blue.
Nothing is blooming, nothing is new.
The flowers are crying blood from their thorns,
Happiness is starting to mourn.

Beauty fell.
Humans yell.
All is not well.
What is that smell?

Beauty has fallen.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

1 posted 2003-04-26 11:49 PM

WOW!!! I am almost speechles. I love the rhyme scheme. It is beautiful. Welcome to passions.

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Love Always,
Marrie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-04-30 12:06 PM

Sad poem but written well!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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