Open Poetry #26 |
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Pickles and Purple Chili |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York ![]() |
Pirates at Playgrounds don't tiP, Intellectual children that play with Iguanas that eat purple chil(i). Chicken nuggets, and the Cherrry kool-aid chiC, Kites being flown by kangaroos that kicK. Little children disappear, Lost in a paralleL. Evergreen trees of a Elephant employeE Some how the childrenthat can See, cry near the SeashellS. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ *`·.¸.·´* Love Always, Marrie I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT! [This message has been edited by Kellie_Cantrell (04-26-2003 10:56 PM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kellie, this is really neat. I like the way you have "pickles" spelled at the beginning, middle, and the ending. That's rally good work. ![]() Hugs, Ethel |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Ethel- Thanks ![]() (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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peaceful_dreamer Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 159SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW |
this is a really good poem. I like how you spelled out "pickles" where you did. that must of took a lot of work to get it right! i admire your talent! peaceful_dreamer |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
No, I worked the poem from bottom up, I put in the words that had the letters in first and then filled in the rest. Thanks (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
very interesting style here. Enjoyed something different from my normal tastes. ![]() You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Thanks, sometimes I have to write on what my mood is like, at this time my mind was in chaos mode. as you can tell. Love, |
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