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Open Poetry #26

Simplicity

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-04-26 07:57 PM

                                Silence that you left behind,
                                   Ideas you left unheard.
Melodies, you left unsung.
Possibilities that have not yet come.
          Loyalty, that has not shown its face.
                                    Incredibility hanging deeply in your eyes.
                                      Crying out you looked to me for solitude.
                                    It took you until then where you realized you were lacking,
                                  Teach ability, wandering through your thoughts, not teachable.
        Your mind unable to concentrate, on understandability.

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
*`·.¸.·´*

Love Always,
Marrie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-04-26 09:29 PM

interesting i enjoyied your thoughts

"It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you"

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2003-04-26 11:45 PM

Thank You

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
*`·.¸.·´*

Love Always,
Marrie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2003-04-29 09:11 AM

This is a good write.....got me thinking!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-25 04:54 AM

wow

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

5 posted 2003-07-13 03:40 AM

and I am still thinking about this very piece and how to make myself be more teachable.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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