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P.R.C
Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-04-26 12:00 PM


I'm under your spell
But this you cannot tell
I try not to let it show
Because how you would react, I do not know

You are fun, so wonderful with grace
I dream of being in your embrace
When I talk to you, it gets kinda scary
Because I'm not ordinary
I'm afraid you will get to see
What I hide inside of me

Our friendship is going well
I don't want to spoil this, so I will never tell
You are a charmer
Like some sort of knight in armour
When I am in pain
You are the one keeping me sane

I've hurt since many years ago
But you make me feel like it isn't so
I'm scared to tell you how I feel
Because I don't think you could deal
So I keep it in my head,
Where it's all so real

Talking to you makes my day
It touches me more than I dare say
I'd be a willing slave
Because me, you did save

All my thoughts, by you are possessed
But all of this you would never have guessed
I won't tell you, you would be unimpressed

I wish I could tell you that I like your style
And that you nearly always make me smile

If you called me, I'd come running
I'd try to make you smile, try and bring the fun in
I don't know if I'm ready for the world outside
I try to pretend but I'm finding it hard to hide
Dreaming of being by your side

I wish I could tell you
But I doubt you would understand
So I'll never take you by the hand

Everything that life sends
All the twists and bends
The family and friends
I would be there until it ends


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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-04-26 12:11 PM


Ah Hannah..Mark will love this..
and you know...it's great that you started out as friends first.
That is so important, to have the love of your life as your best friend.
~Hugs Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

KoKo
Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-04-26 12:21 PM


This is really good and I can identify with it very much right now. One day, the words are just going to tumble out of your mouth, perhaps by surprise, but sometimes that's the best way.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-04-30 12:27 PM


He'll know if he doesn't tell you first....
Nice poem!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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