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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-04-14 06:11 PM

Enveloped in the satin whispers of this April spell
Precursor, momentary tears that quench and blossom well
For this, the captivate of spring in shoulder bare bathed white
Enveloped in the sweet surprise, as spring has set on summer sight

And not to be held hostage, for this a simple breath in trace
Perchance a balmy sun spot, perhaps a single moments grace
For this the melting murmur, to soothe the cares of winter passed
And not to be suspected of a promise made or covet last

As cheer in drifts, of walks long since remembered, once upon a shine
Dispersed among the gentle chirps of creatures meek and smiles fine
For this, a magical expression from the pallet of a master unsurpassed
As joy within the simple thrill of springs soft breezes, pleases gasped

Copyright Kkh 4/14/03

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-04-14 06:35 PM

Kathleen~
This is such a lovely write.
I especially enjoyed the closing lines.
Beautifully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-14-2003 06:36 PM).]

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-04-14 06:42 PM

Kathleen,

This is wonderful. And the last four lines, my favorite.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-04-14 07:35 PM

Welcome back and thanx for a beautiful
piece of your poetic arsenal.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-04-14 07:37 PM

Beautiful...absolutely captivating!

~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2003-04-14 10:03 PM

Very beautiful...soft and full of promise..

believe in what your heart feels...

Bombella
Junior Member

since 2003-04-10

Posts 19
Western Australia

6 posted 2003-04-14 10:15 PM

Breathtaking words. This is very enlighting. Well done.
Cherie..

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2003-04-15 05:42 PM

Gorgeous, would love to see it in the book!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2003-04-15 08:58 PM

TD

"For this, a magical expression from the pallet of a master unsurpassed
As joy within the simple thrill of springs soft breezes, pleases gasped"

Indeed it is a magical expression!

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