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All That We Behold |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We meet our truest selves in the eyes of our lover - As the sun discovers its own light reflected from the moon. We are both in turn the sun and the moon...the mirror and the lover - We are the gaze itself. Falling in love...with all that we behold. |
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time2shine New Member
since 2003-04-20
Posts 7 |
We are so vulnerable  but it hurts so good  Great poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"We are both in turn the sun and the moon...the mirror and the lover -" How beautiful and how very true.... ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Beautiful...and so true....there is so much love around us and falling in love is all that is perfection...Well said... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, I know He has a plan for all and we are destined to another all throughout time and when we find that someone we find the constellations! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton  Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-25-2003 08:32 PM).] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful and so true. Very nice indeed Julie |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Loved this, Eric... Sunkissed. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
We are both in turn the sun and the moon...the mirror and the lover - Your verses are unforgettable...evoking countless daydreams as I seek my true love. -Patricia |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Damn. I wish I held the wisdom you do. Thank you very sharing this...You just explained a whole lot to me. ~Sits quietly and ponders~ I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Okay, you are definately in LOVE or something, and I'm liking it! These pieces of yours just drip - WOW! I'm definately looking for MORE! I think what I like about your writing so far, is that you can say SO much with SO few words. Brilliant! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Falling in love with all that we behold." Enjoyed....James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc: the first line caught me good but this is my favorite part: We are both in turn the sun and the moon...the mirror and the lover - amazingly passionate xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We are both in turn the sun and the moon...the mirror and the lover - We are the gaze itself. That is such a lovely poetic verse. Just beautiful Ericc~ every word of it. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Worlds unfolding in the depth of a gaze .... a lover's gaze, where only beauty lies. The Universe of You Lovers are everything to each other and you express this so magically. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, yes |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like your point of view. I do. Going to read all your stuff from now on. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
We are what we share. Thank you for sharing. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Simply an amazing poem! I wish I could write small poems... All of mine are as long as a pole... “We meet our truest selves in the eyes of our lover” “We are the gaze itself” Classic!! Bravo!!! Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (05-04-2003 02:02 AM).] |
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