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The day the walls spoke
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The day the walls spoke |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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The righteous are all but dead I hear the walls shout "but not I " smile beating my chest then they at once begin vomiting years of untold atrocities over and over never stopping horrid blasphemy hidden sins dark secrets all too terrible to mention naming names mothers, fathers, preachers, presidents all I wait for my name just for curiosity's sake when I hear silence I feel my self righteous state wholly justified so I begin donning dime store halo then it begins rushing like a stampeded herd or rushing like a river so many things flooding words letters syllables all attached with my name blasphemies evil thoughts now portrayed loudly I begin to weep tears fall to the floor on knees wail weeping washing Halo's fall echoes through empty halls as I sit reconsider preconceived eternal destinies wiping my tears with tainted bloodied hands Surely as time creeps by and many a day falls away megalomania re appears i remembered the day the walls talked and my aspirations of divinity do soon disappear |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I sit reconsider preconceived eternal destinies wiping my tears with tainted bloodied hands what things theese words say, i liked this very much!! "It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you" |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you very much |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is very powerful and intense. Great Job! Eric |
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A2J Junior Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 43South Africa |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Brad - this is an excellent deep writing, says a lot... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Brad, Such a powerful, deep, make me soul search my own self, write!!! Awesome! Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness (I want to vote on this) Brad: powerful thoughts here all agreed fully This IS one of the most amazing I have read from you maybe the best so far astounded xxoo |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes, Brad, such insight here! Can't tell you how many times I thought my halo was glued on there, and then something reminds me that I need to do some soul-searching! This is magnificent, and something that I really truly appreciate!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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