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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-04-25 02:18 PM

Just Another Fantasy

I woke too late and slept too long,
decisions forced by written tears.
My heart had windows, hazed in dew
invisible, illusion's fears.

Regretting never, feeling's shame,
nor moments spent in tenderness.
Just another fantasy,
a trick of mind to real, suppress.

Unrestrained in world of mind
those fantasies imagine more
than ever could or would entail
in world of real, of heart's explore.

I am no challenge in these dreams
or maybe nightmares ride the stress
of fairy tales, fictitious thoughts
of give and take, no more, no less.

Never poet would I be
if not for life, it's turn around.
I amble reckless, swerve the course,
to stray away from being bound.

Life's a gamble, two hands I've lost,
never good at betting games.
So my rhyme continues on
spinning dreams with empty frames.

Faceless, spirits press me on
pushing here and prodding there.
I stand before the eyes of you
with only poet's words to share.

I've tried to stay my words of rhyme,
for those who feel sometimes they're forced.
But they just flow from want in real
of nothing held when love's divorced.

A fantasy within a dream
of make-believe, a bubble's rise,
staggered fiction on the edge
of tattered romance, behind mind's eyes.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-04-25 02:37 PM

GirlFriend~
When you emote ... you do it B E A U T I M O U S L Y ~

The cadence of this piece is sublime~
*Huglets* from the South~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

2 posted 2003-04-25 11:56 PM

As indicated, nice cadence and flow, good effort, enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-04-26 07:02 PM

thank you Marge and Tim for taking the time to respond to a "Moody Me"

~smiling~
M

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-04-30 02:48 PM

Beautiful "MOODY" thoughts!!!!
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-04-30 02:54 PM

I've tried to stay my words of rhyme,
for those who feel sometimes they're forced.
But they just flow from want in real
of nothing held when love's divorced.

Maureen, your words are never forced as they come from your heart. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-04-30 03:25 PM

You express your emotions well!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-05-01 11:11 AM

Brigette, Chris and Brad...thank you for your kind words.

M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-05-28 05:18 PM

Very nice...James

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