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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-04-25 11:53 AM

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~~~~~~
As we write our hearts
in our poetry
Do the ones of us who read
really take time to see

The hurt or confusion
inside the writer may feel
Sometimes not fantasy
but aches that are real

I'm speaking not of times
that we write about
When thinking of our Love
so much we laugh and shout

But speaking of the times
when feeling from deep inside
That it would feel much better
to run away and hide

I know that to myself
this poem does surely speak
And not only to others
the thoughts would seem to seek

For I want to truly feel
others words in my heart
Then maybe I can help with
an encouraging word to start

A tender and loving heart
seems everyone has here
Writing not always with a smile
but sometimes with a tear
~~~~~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-26-2003 08:38 AM).]

Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03

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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

1 posted 2003-04-25 11:57 AM

I know that to myself
this poem does surely speak
And not only to others
the thoughts would seem to seek

Rings so true

Great poem

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-04-25 11:59 AM

The "E" in Ethel, must also stand for "Empathetic". This sensitive and loving poem perfectly illustrates what a caring heart you truly do have.

"E"xtra big hugs for you being you!
Linda

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-04-25 12:01 PM

A good poet will not only seek to be understood, but to understand. To reach into the heart of the writer, pull out the contents and decipher what it all means. Thats why the ones written with tears are so painful.. thats what I think anyway.
Enjoyed this

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-04-25 12:44 PM

Ethel,

I looked all over for this.

I agree with Linda..You have a big loving heart and your empathy and compassion always shine through...

And, it is hard to answer some of these poems for you never know if written from the heart or the mind, current or ever...a real event...

better to stay on the safe side than do more harm.....

This is a wonderful poem filled with reminders...

Hugs to you, Love, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-04-25 01:25 PM

Ethel, this is so very much like you..
taking the time to listen and lend an ear
to one who is sad or down, and has written about it, takes so little time, and just may help to cheer them up a bit.
Very nicely said sweet poetess.
~Smiles & Caring Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2003-04-25 01:30 PM

Very true Ethel. Poets often want us to read "between the lines." Well done, and I enjoyed this. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-04-25 01:31 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Ethel, God Bless You, sweet friend, I think the E in your first name also stands for Empathetic! (big hugggssssss) I believe God gave me my name for a reason, because it means "comfort" and I want all the world to live in comfort and that ones tears can become golden from anothers love! (wipes tears) You have an angelic heart and because of that, you deserve extra special angel hugs for this wonderful poem, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

8 posted 2003-04-25 02:57 PM

Ethel, I love this. You've done a wonderful job here.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

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A Mountain Paradise

9 posted 2003-04-25 05:41 PM

Ethel, you are such a kind and loving person and I appreciate what you are saying and feeling in your poem.

Thank you ... hugs and luvs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

Toerag
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Ala bam a

10 posted 2003-04-25 05:56 PM

Well done Ethel

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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11 posted 2003-04-25 11:40 PM

'For I want to truly feel
others words in my heart
Then maybe I can help with
an encouraging word to start'

It's nice to know some look deeper...

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

12 posted 2003-04-26 06:40 AM

beautifully said my friend , yes your poem i understand and comprehend .....
Sometimes I fantasise,sometimes I write with tears in my eyes

Hope

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2003-04-26 07:38 AM

Thomas,
I couldn't seem to get that part just right
when I wrote it. I just didn't want anyone to
think I was lecturing them. This poem
was to myself first. Thank you for liking it.

.
.
Thank you, Linda,
I really do care about the feelings of other
people. I know how it feels to get my feelings
hurt. Even if I get hurt or angry, though,
it doesn't seem to ever last for very long.
The child in me likes to laugh and play
too much for me to stay angry. LOL

.
.
Alyssa,
I believe so, too. Mpst writers who write from the heart reveal secret things on their
poems, I think. Sometimes when they don't intend
to reveal some things, when they write the
secrets just start tumbling out, it seems. Thank you.

.
.
Heart hugs to you all,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-26-2003 08:11 AM).]

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-04-26 08:06 AM

Pat,
thank you so much. I know. It is hard sometimes
to reply to poems. I hesitate at my first reaction
a lot. I'm finding out, though, that mostr writers write
from personal feelings even if the actual event
didn't happen. They have something woithin that prompts
the write, I think.....unless it's a completely
fictional story like some of our great poets
around here write. Even then, though, their personalities
shine through.
And, oh yes, we need to be careful about what we say.
Sometimes we can do more harm than good, when
we really have no intentions of doing harm.
Thank you, friend.

.
.
Chris,
I believe that, too.When things are too hard to
come right out and say, people tend to try to hide
behind their words, I think.
Thank you, friend, for liking my poem.

.
.
Noah, you are one of the most tender-hearted
and compassionate people I've ever known.
I can tell that you sincerely care about how
people feel, too. You are like me and don't
want to hurt anyone's feelings. And, when
they are already hurt, you want to help
them to be happy and to smile again.
Thank you for being YOU friend.

.
.
Heart Hugs to you all

Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-04-26 08:16 AM

KoKo,
thank you so very much
I'm really glad that you liked
it. I really do appreciate
you saying that.

.
.
Marti,
thank you very, very much. You are
the one who is so sweet and loving.
It shows through all your poetry
and your replies.

.
.
Hi Mr. Toe

It sure is good to see you here.
We really miss you when you don't
come around more often.
Thank you for liking my poem. I'm glad.
.
.
Heart hugs to you all,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-26-2003 09:31 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

16 posted 2003-04-26 10:47 AM

Ethel:

of course  . . . you always see beneath
and this is what makes you YOU

The sad ones?  Are sometimes better
than the happy ones - they show change
and growth - letting go and yes . . .
we do listen    xxoo

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

17 posted 2003-04-26 01:12 PM

Often I am brought to tears as I listen with my heart to the words I read...When talented poets such as you write it is impossible to not feel your words...in joy and pain...Beautifully written from the heart of a true poet...**hugs**

passing shadows
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18 posted 2003-04-26 01:33 PM

and I thank God (and Ron) for this place and all these wonderful folks from around the nation and world who are here to listen.

Wonderful write Ethel, as always! You're a great listener.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

19 posted 2003-04-26 09:34 PM

Sue, you know, I believe you're right. Most everyone
on Passions really listens
when they read a poem. I really appreciate
everyone here. I appreciate you for always
reading me and replying with such
compasssionate and caring words.

Hugs,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

20 posted 2003-04-26 09:37 PM

Startime, thank you so very much for such
a sweet and caring reply. I really do
appreciate your words.

Hugs,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

21 posted 2003-04-26 09:40 PM

Thank you, Dixie. I also thank God and Ron
for this home of ours at Passions and for
our great big Family Of Friends. Ya'll just
don't know how very much you all help me, with your kindness and compassion.

Hugs,
Ethel

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