Open Poetry #26 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Tonight words would not escape these lips. Their confinement, instead seeps out in tears. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, me too... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
touching write!! "It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you" |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Always good to read you. P.S. Love the signature! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I felt this one. Hugs, Ethel |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
This was very sad, I hope the words will speak again soon and the tears will be of joy, not sorrow. I enjoyed the read. Sincerely Rick |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! So much said in so few words! Well done Maureen. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"Tonight words would not escape these lips. Their confinement, instead seeps out in tears." ~ That is why it is always good to have someone special to share these types of matters with...Much is said in few words here...words that could not escape. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
This poem of yours reminded me of one of my old ones...maybe I will post it. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This is extremely touching and so powerful. I really enjoyed this I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
passing shadows, EagleOne, nice to see you here. Thank you for the visit...and the thoughts on my signature. Ethel, just one of those nights...and days that follow. Rick, I am not that good with verbal words anymore. I can remember when I use to be told to speak less and say more...now I can barely do either. Nancy, I only a few words in me, that made any sense Opeth, yes it is nice when you have that someone to relate to. Maybe some day... I responded to yours with a new poem of my own called "Just Another Fantasy". KoKo,thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts. M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness Maureen . . . you are reading my mind now - aren't you? Amazing write in so few thoughts that hold much power . . . xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you JamesM and littlewing. I guess many of us have situations in common. hugs M |
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