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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Meadow A meadow of winged monarchs and bloomed out purple withered upright faded to periwinkle iris I would bed with such color bogged and drowning green breezed with wild rose Listened stream of riffled rocks I am song too -------- a memory from June, 01, when I took a picture with my camera that had no film in it. Still see it with the words, almost as good. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You could be a stone within a babbling brook, or some other small but so delicate and significant thing.... Excellent write Martie... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, dear Martie...your words paint the picture for us beautifully. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooh, I think....yes....I can see it too Martie!! Awww....thankyou for this to-night sweet lady. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Your painted a beautiful picture, Im sure the camera couldnt have shown such a beautiful one. Lovely  Julie |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
liked this very much, it has a softness to it. "one needs not challenge all the players to win the game" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Considering that the mental camera's yours and loaded with your words, yes -- it's probably better than a picture. "would bed with such color bogged and drowning green breezed with wild rose Listened stream of riffled rocks I am song too" Green...yes, a good color -- and we do know that you are song. You show that every time you share a bit of your writing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well Martie I read your poem and this is what I saw, so may I share it with you as you did the beauty of your day?  M. Stadler Webshots . .  [This message has been edited by Mysteria (04-24-2003 11:27 PM).] |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I often go fishing without bait, and I sit there on the bank and enjoy the pictures that nature provides without the benefit of a camera and therefore leave the beauty behind when I return home. Martie, your poetic camera captures beauty far better than film ever could. Us non photographic types are fortunate you allow to view your pictures. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are an inspiration with every single word you write. No film, that's so perfect! What a great shot this is Martie~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You show us what we dream of seeing... Thank you Martie Regards, Sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie The pictue of your mind was so much nicer.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your words allow us to see, too... vividly. *S* And yes... you are song... a flawless melody enriching every heart lucky enough to hear. *S* |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
martie, this is beautiful. who needs a camera ? june x |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartiSis~ Thank you for the double-prints !  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful Martie! You melted with the beauty of the meadow and shared your one song. Love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I wish I could take a picture too of every beautiful thing I see in nature! (kiss on cheek) But your beautiful words made me feel like I was seeing the picture, yay, everybody wins, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-25-2003 02:20 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as always a very lovely write. It's always a pleasure looking through your eyes. hugs M |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - thanks for another view of the wonder seen through you reyes and shared though yor soul - just lovely Martie - Paul |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
To see life through your eyes is a beautiful experience.  Martie. Maree  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Colors flow with brilliance as I envision the beauty of this meadow....Beautiful.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you so much for seeing with me. There is no way I could possible make this as pretty as it actually was. It was magic. Your replies are so much appreciated! Hugs all! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Martie, you DO write magic and I am blessed everytime you allow me to see through your poetic eyes. This is beautiful and I'm keeping it Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"I would bed with such color bogged and drowning green breezed with wild rose" Wow! Ed... |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
awesome write, i can see it with your words. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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