Open Poetry #26 |
Two angels |
Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
and then there were two, two angels, which to choose.. one will lead to eternal happiness, the other to sorrow and despair... never knowing which ive chosen, i walk on... -lance may none know the depths of their own personal hell There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I guess I never followed that line of thinking. As close asI came to it, there were always at least three angels. Interesting post, made me stop and think for a moment or three. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, I personally have never known any angels that would lead someone to sorrow and dispair. Perhaps you may be referring to a fallen angel? If you have a choice, then definitely choose the angel that will lead you to eternal happiness! Interesting poem! Got me thinkin'! Happy trails to you! Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yeah that is a hard topic. I never thought about that before. Hmmmmmmmmm........ This was a thought provoking write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bombella Junior Member
since 2003-04-10
Posts 19Western Australia |
I agree totally. This was a very thought provoking piece. Very nice indeed! Cherie.. |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
OH OH OH - I LIKE this so much! You said SO much with so few lines! WOW! It's so nice to know that someone else out there is unsure of which they've chosen. *sigh* This is incredible, because I know just how you feel, but I never looked at it quite this way before. WOW, I'm just speechless... I walk on... I LOVE IT! ~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I know the reality of my wrong choices....it often hurts deeply. Good write!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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