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Open Poetry #26

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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-04-24 11:15 AM

A silouette of darkness,
hides your face.
As if the road had some dampness.
You'll probably lose this race.
          Ever wonder how to catch up,
          to a falling sky.
          put my foot in the stirrup,
          Let's go for a ride, little guy.
No where to run,
does he have a gun?
Should I pick up the pace,
and head to outer space?
           The darkness lingers inside,
           I'd like to run and hide.
           In fear that I could have already died,
           and then you cried.

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    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-04-24 11:43 AM

nice!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-04-24 01:01 PM

Ever wonder how to catch up,
to a falling sky.

love that line...

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2003-04-24 01:30 PM

'Should I pick up the pace, and head to outer space'...Kellie, that's a great line, and I can't tell you how many times I've wished that I could do just that!! What a great write!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

4 posted 2003-04-26 07:49 PM

Sunnyone- I have been saving that line forever, i finally had the perfect poem for it!

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

5 posted 2003-07-13 03:56 AM

I've been reading all my poems this morning and revisiting the past a bit and I am learning a lot about myself. I enjoy this.

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