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Morning rambles |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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Dreary morning, long day looming, fraught with desire' for the potential of change. Cold wet, (spring?) morning, dripping incessantly, its liquid depression, and cloudy compulsion. Wordsmith stuggling, with inadequate tools, to paint the life, wished for desperately. scribbling scribe, wrestling with muse, extracting trembling thought, insufficient to hearten. Dreary damn rainy day, cursing joy and its ilk, chasing love from life, and soaking sullied soul. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a wrestling job... This, I enjoyed, JP. We've had such a long drought in our area, that I for one am glad to see the "dreary" of your write - we need to have our ponds fill up and allow the grasses to come knee high again [can you tell I'm in an agricultural part of the country?]... the only thing I wrestled with this morning was my brain arguing with my body about the getting out of bed part of my day...my muse, on the otherhand, was no where to be seen. At LEAST you are talking to yours!  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I hope you find some sunshine in your day.....This was a cool write!!!! I feel it!!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Methinks your words you stated here Sound like a bit of Oregon cheer The leaden skies and moisture drear give me an urge; kick weatherman's rear. Nice write! PS Greatly enjoyed your acrostics. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
JP - like your writing style. And the way you see the rain in a different perspective... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) There will be days like this, but the rain brings much beauty too and when you're singing in the rain, seems nothing can penetrate the moment! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet JP, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is brilliant. i have felt much the same many many times on days such as this. thanks jp for a great poem. hugs from june x |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sounds like a perfect day to wrestle with the muse...nevermind me heh... I really enjoyed this JP and like your style. Maree  |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
This is very cool. I like it very much.  Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah! |
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