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A Bit Rusty
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A Bit Rusty |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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A BIT RUSTY Singing birds and budding trees a scratching dog… he must have flees Children playing their voices loud stored up energy has to come out I know this poem doesn’t make sense but let me say something to my defence I haven’t been rhyming for quite a while the reason was simple I lost my smile Finding it back was not so easy So please take this poem not serious I still feel…. a bit rusty! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Neeraja! And you don't seem rusty at all.. Come on lets see you smile!  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
this is nicely done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Neeraja, you're not rusty at all, I believe the best poetry always comes from the heart and sometimes I rhyme, sometimes I don't, but I put my feelings as first priority! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute, I enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well get that oil can and lubricate those hinges... you're back now... we'll be your interim, until you are once again... smiling. |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Smile ! Enjoy the sunshine in your heart cause you have just opened it up again. But nor the less never feel that down that you cant smile cause it heals the soul in bad days. Dreamer |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I'm glad to see you smiling again, glad to meet you...and think that was very cute!!! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I hope your smile sticks around awhile.... I love this!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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