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If You Would
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IF YOU WOULD” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When dark of night touches light of day, and the moon sighs to sun of dawn, I would come to you then, if you would, an embrace you to have, one thereon… If you were ten thousand miles today, over hills, mountains, and oceans be, I would come to you there, if you would, for just one kiss of loving lips, to me… ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Bill..this is so very romantic! Well done....much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'If you were ten thousand miles today, over hills, mountains, and oceans be, I would come to you there, if you would, for just one kiss of loving lips, to me…' Know exactly what you mean Bill! You said it perfectly... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well you must have thousands of women with their lips all puckered up and just waiting for you to arrive!  EA |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Romanitic inded  enjoyed Bill. Maree. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So pretty, the way you have expressed this unexhaustable journey to love. TD [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (04-23-2003 07:09 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, I have to agree with Earth Angel. We're all waiting ... Hugs and waiting, Marti |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Well done, Charles....hearts will follow you and meet you half way...Sensually romantic... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC You are right - one would travel to the ends of the earth for just the right person to love. Nicely done. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely very romantic an expression of love felt deep within. Julie |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
hmmmmmmmmmmm, so loving this is~ If only~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is so romantic and pretty.  Hugs,  Ethel |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...As always, your poetry speaks to the heart of a romantic. I am one such person. This poem was so beautiful and so passion-flavored. Wow!!! To think that a man would have these loving thoughts and express them so well...is just mind-boggling. Bravo, Bill!!! This poem is as silky smooth as satin sheets; and just as seductive. ***Ivy Rose |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderfully romantic |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You choose the best hour - the dawn - for your wish to merge.... lips upon lips .... Evokes deep melting. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
BC, this one is greatness in itself! BRAVO!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I'm all puckered up waiting. The poem without the kiss still leads me to sighing though. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill...Love can travel over oceans and mountains, can't it? Loved this! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
deserves another read! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill: Ohh this is lovely - full of comfort such a sweety xxoo |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Well, well, well.. and WOW, WOW, WOW.. I'm sure Scotty could be persuaded to "beam ya there".. Lovely write, Sirra Pepper |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I too wish for you always to go the distance and have love close to your heart forever, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This is so soft and sweet..I absolutely love it I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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