Open Poetry #26 |
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melting pot of two old poems :) |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land ![]() |
Even you, my muse, will just abandon me? a few loyal years have meant nothing to thee? I dip my fingers in paint, spread its texture on cold but the face reflected back... intrudes. oh, so politely! a frame, sun-kissed in red drowns the ghost of a land will my muse, just once more let me, mix the beauty with the soil? |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
quite a interesting write, |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Thank you QjQ for your reply ![]() "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good merge |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
whoops! I didn't mean to submit this to the book, please don't waste votes on it... (claire scolds herself) love, Claire "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Loved the merge i do the same sometimes I have a bunch of disjointed lines but find away to use them in other poems or create merges like this. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
lovely You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
thank you aenimal, luckily the lines make sense (to me at least) when joined together lol. love, claire "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Thank you Temptress for your sweet word ![]() love, Claire "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Claire: I believe your muse just did this is incredible good luck xxoo |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
dear little wing, thank you so much for your reply ![]() love, Claire "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed this melting pot. ![]() |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
thanks midnitesun, might have been at the right temperature, what do you think? ![]() |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
gorgeous sweetie! ah, melting pot.... i'm hungry! lol off to get some tea xxxxxxxx Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Lol!! you insatiable hungry person!! ![]() Thanks for your comments hun ![]() (darn. me is hungry too now!) "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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