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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-04-23 10:50 AM

Sleepless

Flowered paper
two dimensional
appears to move
three dimensional
as lace shadows
from night beams
of moon’s light
stream in

Fullest of moon
lights my dreams
so
feel the pull
that is
scattering sleep
along the prairie
and walk with
me
in the wind

Come help me
gather my thoughts
as they run
as rampant
as children
on a spring day

Then just lay
quiet with me
here on the plains
here in my spirit
let me feel
you telling me
it will be
all right
in all ways
always

Then

Then let
the sound
of me

Touch the moon

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-04-23 11:05 AM

"Then just lay
quiet with me
here on the plains
here in my spirit
let me feel
you telling me
it will be
all right
in all ways
always

Then

Then let
the sound
of me

Touch the moon"

==========================================

Karilea...this gave me goosebumps...
good ones..but goosebumps!
This is SO beautiful..
I'm sorry, I can't find the right words at the moment...
A keeper for my library.
~Smiles & Hugs, Hip-Sis~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-04-23 11:17 AM

Sunshine

~*~

IWIHWT

~*~

EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-23-2003 11:19 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-04-23 11:20 AM

Now I remember exactly why I quit writing....I'd rather read beauty like this!
Wonderful write Kari.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-04-23 12:32 PM

excellent write as usual from one who hasn't slept properly in weeks..argh

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-04-23 12:54 PM

feel the pull
that is
scattering sleep
along the prairie
and walk with
me
in the wind

My goodness, my goodness. Karilea, this is so beautiful and soothing to read. hugs to you for this! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2003-04-23 01:02 PM

Then let
the sound
of me

Touch the moon

gently soft and wistful... very nicely done my friend.. very nice indeed.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-04-23 07:24 PM

Wonderful!
This one left me near speechless.
Eric

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2003-04-23 07:29 PM

Beautiful, Karilea!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2003-04-23 07:29 PM

KarileaKarilea~

'feel the pull
that is
scattering sleep
along the prairie
and walk with
me
in the wind'

I REALLY like this thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

10 posted 2003-04-23 07:31 PM

Sleepless sure inspired you to weave a vision of perfection...I love it...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2003-04-24 01:18 PM

Karilea this is very very beautiful. I am happy I came across it.
You see in the middle of the night beauty is born.
Love, Margherita

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

12 posted 2003-04-24 01:23 PM

Oh yes, I think this particular Sunshine is most capable of touching the moon!! I always love to read you, Sun-sis, and this one is exceptionally brilliant!!!!!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

13 posted 2003-04-24 01:28 PM

Fullest of moon
lights my dreams

this is a absolute write,loving and warm

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

14 posted 2003-04-24 01:53 PM

Hmm what's that word again? WOW?

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

15 posted 2003-04-24 03:39 PM

I think film noir, then I think no, valentino, then I just think WOW, think I'll just leave it at that. except maybe Moonlight becomes you...

Regards,
Olias.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

16 posted 2003-04-24 05:40 PM

A write from the heart that left me stirred and wistful.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2003-04-24 10:18 PM

The sound of you?  Doing what?  Snoring??

NOPE!

Love this one,  so delicate, ethereal...

Nicely done Sun..

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