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Open Poetry #26

Lost In Space

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-04-22 11:36 PM

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The mind folds into black
Attempts of light so flawlessly deceived
To spiral down the funneled tomb
Of what the heart has penned indelible
For nothing else would be believed

To come to rest in wanderings
Unearthed of soul spills choked relent
In disarray upon the crystal lay
In diamond dust on sand lined sighs
The mind folds into tranquil scent

There visits what the soul has craved
Freed from dungeons built and barred
To spiral down the staircase
These gentle tones of fragile tears
The mind folds back to velvet starred

Copyright Kkh 4/22/03

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-04-22 11:52 PM

ThisDiamond - your writing tonight is exquisite, your thoughts dreamy, your words spell binding...

BC

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-04-23 06:30 PM

nicely done!

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2003-04-23 07:16 PM

I seem to feel transported to a time filled with magic when reading this wonderful poem...the magic you weave with your words is incredible....I love it..

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

4 posted 2003-04-23 10:09 PM

Very nice indeed, I enjoyed this much, great dreamy imagery.

Julie

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2003-04-23 10:52 PM

This is beautiful, Kathleen.

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