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My Gardener
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
My Gardener I see her among the daisies Weeding out distractors from her garden of colour. On hands and knees She loosens the soil With her trowel. Each plant knows her care And owes it's place to Her garden design. Bleeding hearts, lilies, forget-me-nots All grow among the rocks She deftly placed to accent garden spots. Her thumb is green But her heart is golden As she works among the daisies. believe in what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (06-02-2003 03:19 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is such a sweet poem. I really enjoyed the read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quietly...simple and deftly...beautiful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was incredibly touching. This poem shows the depth of your love. You don't just see her, you SEE her... Warm hugs, EA |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
scorpio - oh, I love daisies, and I love this poem! Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Scorpio, I happen to love daisies..they are my favourite. And, I love lilies, and bleeding heart, and.. In fact this sounds like my garden as it also has special rocks!! This is wonderful in it's imagery, I can clearly see your love tending her garden. I love this! And...I'm keeping it! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done Scorpio.......good writing. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done.. a tribute of the heart..and an understanding of the soul beneath perhaps.. good stuff |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Smiles to you I dare say the golden heart begets the green thumb. Nice colors Scorpio. TD |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Julie, thank you for your read and comments.. I'm flattered Karilea...thanks for your kind words.. She is quite the gardener and I do love to be in the garden with her...thank you, Linda.. Daisies are very special in a garden...thanks Chris.. Enchantress, I'd love to see your garden and rocks...it must be a special place if it has your care..  Thank you Etome...I appreciate your read.. Very kind comments, Ron...much appreciated.. Yes, ThisDiamond, I do believe you're right...thank you.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
scorpio....In a garden you can always see the heart of the gardener. I have a gardener very much like yours. Loved this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Scorpio, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I believe gardening is truly an art made by God, to show how we are capable of giving life of our own, to the cherubs of the Earth and how a gentle grace makes the most beautiful magic happen! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely piece, it reminds me of my mum out in her garden working planting flowers and plants. Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good write, very tender |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Martie... good gardeners always leaves their mark.. Noah, thank you for your comments and kindness.. Glad this brought a goood memory to you, Julie.. passing shadows...thank you for reading and commenting.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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