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Open Poetry #26

Lost Petal to a Rose

LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-04-21 09:26 PM

A lost petal to a rose
That lights the atmosphere
The simple closure of a heart
Thats sometimes doubt consumes

The smile worth a rivers tear
That grants a countless wish
That makes a star ignite with passion
And become embraceful

Eyes that make the night sky shine
Glitter in the moons shadow
As jewels to the hands of grace
That pass across the lining of stars

In this petal lies a hope
And messages of a guide
Let me take you to the doors
And let the past be forgotten

Let us open a new hope
And close the past, away

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-28-2003 10:30 PM).]

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-04-22 01:57 PM

very nicely written,

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-04-28 04:37 PM

Nice.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-04-28 10:31 PM

The sound of the fall
of this single petal...
was magical.

Thank you!

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