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insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-04-21 07:04 PM

The rose fell to the floor
As loneliness echoed through the slamming door
My heart squeezed love's pain
I was alone and left in the rain

My car a spaceship to emptiness
Taking me from happiness
I was allowed to go anywhere
Except here

The rain fell with my tears
Each tear a memory of the years
I can't look back
Or the tender moments would react

And hold me in the puddles of pain
My will was weak and I cried again
The headlights blurred my vision
I had to make a decision

I turned back around and drove fast
I wasn't going to give up the past
I should have told her how much I loved her
How could I have left unsure

I was ready and the rain had stopped
Jumped from the car and the gate I hopped
Busted through the door without a care
Shocked! To see her arms around another man in his underwear

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-04-21 07:42 PM

ooh, what a bad sad scene!
talk about shock...

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-04-21 07:46 PM

heart breaker it is ,but with facts of life,

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-04-21 08:49 PM

it is so sad......but Lois will make things right

of course I'm voting....

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

4 posted 2003-04-22 01:09 AM

Interesting, especially the end.

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

5 posted 2003-04-22 04:11 AM

ver sad and well expressed anguish

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

6 posted 2003-04-22 07:46 PM

Midnitesun
Thanks for the reply

QjQ
Hearts can mend….thanks for the reply!

Lois
It’s always wonderful to see you…
x-ray eyes are looking at you!…Lois….

.....and away!
...up
.up

SPIRIT
Thank you!

CSKpoet
Thanks for replying!

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

7 posted 2003-04-23 07:25 PM

Don't recall reading this one. I think it would be a good addition to the book.

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

8 posted 2003-04-23 07:59 PM

Parker
Thanks a lot brother…I’m glad your poems
made it into the book!

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