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I Don't Want To Be Rich (tanka for larry's challenge)
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I Don't Want To Be Rich (tanka for larry's challenge) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Traits in abundance- apathy and laziness, showing reluctance to use God's life gift fully I hope to dump them behind larry's challenge~~ /pip/Forum7/HTML/000552.html [This message has been edited by kaile (04-13-2003 12:42 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kaile! Challenge well met! In Tanka form yet. Not easy, taking a full message and diluting it to its full richness! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-13-2003 12:45 PM).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hey, thanks for the kind and flattering sentiments...i do my best and hope it's enough... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! This is wonderful. So few words that express so much feeling. Very well done. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Quite a deed! In content and challenge met. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am totally impressed! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kaile, this is a wonderful message and a challenge well met.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Good job! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kaile, Tell me again how you got so mature so early! You're too cool dude. I love it. Way to go and such a unique format for that challenge.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kaile, Ever teaching me more. Liked the form and your ability to bring across the idea so well. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I agree! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You've got it.... Enjoyed!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 BRAVO!You're just getting better and better, yanno that? This is one of my favorite forms...tanka. Though you'd never know it, I haven't written one in over a year. OK, so maybe I'm inspired.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is really so true! We blame everything on anything, never stopping to ponder about past events that helped to shape current situations. This is the result of apathy and laziness... Good take on reality.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I juz had to pop in again, coz something juz struck me. I understand where you got the title from, but how does it relate to what you wrote in your tanka?  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
your tankas always shine.....thanks for this jewel. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL - Well done, kaile - apathy and laziness are surely under-rated personal assets...  |
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