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I Do Not Tell |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ If I could write a poem or two As beautiful as all of you Of happiness and love and such Maybe someones heart I'd touch But, happiness just is not there With no one here to even care I do not tell what I might need All these things to myself I keep If love would come my way and stay My days would not be so gray Then I would not feel so worthless And feel a little bit of happiness No more loneliness would I feel And my life would feel more real 4-20-03 |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue- I know this feeling all too well. It is the all too common theme that everyone wishes for that one to love and who will love them back. And I have to absolutely take an objection to the first stanza. You do ahve the talent that many of us wish we had... it is THEY who are too dense to realize what they have standing in front of them. It is their loss. When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
If I could write a poem or two As beautiful as all of you Of happiness and love and such Maybe someones heart I'd touch Check that one off the list....you do that with great regularity. And for the rest -- you never know. You just never know when or where or why or how, but it can happen at the most shockingly, distressingly unlikely times..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sue, and yes you do too have talent!!! So, no more of that, ok??? You're a writer, here amongst a family of writers, and although I know how hard it is to feel so lonely, just keep talking to us...we'll share it with you, my friend!!!  Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings...do not fear...happiness will belong to you also. Look for good things...look for beautiful things...look for blessings...James |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
You are never alone if you have made friends with your self.A person can be lonely in a crowded room. paladin |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue, you write beautifully! Love will knock at your door, just keep your heart on alert! Expect only the best. Your words are so heartfelt, like a prayer. May it be answered! Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sue..you are doing so well.. and you continue to write it out... I think you're doing just fine. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My sister Enchantress is correct Sue. You are doing fine, though you might not see the blue skies through the grey yet. Paladin has a valid point in his response as well. You write lovely poetry sweet lady! hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . and my heart beats with the touch of your words . . . I know this well xxoo |
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