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Open Poetry #26

Touching My Soul

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-06-11 06:07 AM

Touching My Soul

As I look at her picture
she fascinates me.
Her expression is sultry,
no it's sulky,
she's pulling feelings
and emotions fom
inside of me.
I don't know her
but she's someone
I would like
to know.
I feel the attraction.
She is caressing
my heart
and touching
my soul.

JamesLee
June10
2003

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (06-11-2003 06:08 AM).]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-06-11 11:48 AM

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-06-11 12:33 PM

makes one wonder who it is...

I like this very much
*s
M

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-06-11 03:38 PM

James, each verse keeps getting better and better. Well done.

Patricia

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-06-11 04:07 PM

Thank you Brad, Maureen and Patricia for the nice responses...James

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-06-11 04:14 PM

terricic write,,,,

QjQ

SweetSerenity
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since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

6 posted 2003-06-11 05:37 PM

I liked this one.
Simple and straight to the point.
Good job.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

7 posted 2003-06-11 07:22 PM

i loved this one and wonder who she is .

hugs from june xxxxxxx

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-06-12 06:26 AM

Thank you QJQ, Sweet serenity, and junemae for the nice responses...
June she is a local model and I too would like to know who she is...James

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