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Patricia
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0 posted 2003-06-10 10:04 PM


Sorry, I am in one of those moods...

Click Here for a Laugh
(at his expense)

I miss your...
Self centered propensities
Enormous egocentricities
Foolish idiosyncrasies
All about me philosophies

Because...
With all of your neuroses
I guess you didn’t see:
You sure made
For great poetry

And now...
That I am gone,
What will you do?
Honey, don’t worry
'Cause you got you!

And as your...
Number one fan
Your own superstar
You’ll always love you
Just the way you are.


© Copyright 2003 Patricia A. Plotz - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-10 10:06 PM


  loved it!!!  

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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2 posted 2003-06-10 10:07 PM


I know...some people are like that! Too true. Well written, Patricia.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Larry C
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3 posted 2003-06-10 10:27 PM


I think I met him once! LMFO

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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4 posted 2003-06-10 10:49 PM


Hey, I know him! He's the fellow that screams out his own name during sex!
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5 posted 2003-06-10 10:55 PM


I knew someone like this once. And once was enough! lol. Great write. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-06-10 10:58 PM


Patricia - I find it rather amazing that one doesn't even know what you mean when they are told. Sounds as if this is one of those cases. My best to you...

BC

Bridget Shenachie
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7 posted 2003-06-10 11:02 PM


Patricia--this was a superb bit or writing and I'm still laughing at your poem and all the responses it prompted.  Please keep these coming!

Shenachie

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8 posted 2003-06-10 11:03 PM


And as your...
Number one fan
Your own superstar
You’ll always love you
Just the way you are.


Yeah, Patricia, this kind of person loves themselves so much that they can't love anyone else.

Sad, isn't it, to be that way?   It really feels good to love other people, and that kind of person's missing it.

Hugs to you, Lady  
Ethel

Patricia
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9 posted 2003-06-10 11:47 PM


Hey Balladeer...come to think of it...
LOL

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-06-11 02:51 AM


cool write Patricia!
Sunshine
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11 posted 2003-06-11 07:17 AM



ROTFLMFO...Pat, from this point on, you may NOT hide your funny bone from us!  This is so cute...and I wonder how many of us bump into your Ex every day!  Kudos, my friend...big huge kuddlin' Kudos!

MikeFessel
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12 posted 2003-06-11 09:25 AM


Patricia,
Ha ha I loved this. Cool write

         Mike

morefiah
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13 posted 2003-06-11 09:32 AM


Hey!! You mean you were with my sisters ex too! That man does get around doesn't he? LMAO

Garfield

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14 posted 2003-06-11 09:52 AM


Patricia, I'm always up for a laugh, but this was an even bigger one than I had anticipated!  

This was hysterical! Love your sense of humor!--in fact, I love all of your poetry! I am so happy that you joined our family!

Huggums,
Linda

Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2003-06-11 09:59 AM


Holy Crap!  I knew him also!

Susan

Patricia
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16 posted 2003-06-11 12:04 PM


That dude must be getting around...surely there could not be another one like him.  He is one of a kind, perhaps he loves himself so because nobody else will.


JamesMichael
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17 posted 2003-06-11 04:12 PM


I hear they cloned this model...at this very moment a million more are being released into society...look out women of the world...the model is called "a legend in his own mind."   James
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