Open Poetry #26 |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Sorry, I am in one of those moods... Click Here for a Laugh (at his expense) I miss your... Self centered propensities Enormous egocentricities Foolish idiosyncrasies All about me philosophies Because... With all of your neuroses I guess you didn’t see: You sure made For great poetry And now... That I am gone, What will you do? Honey, don’t worry 'Cause you got you! And as your... Number one fan Your own superstar You’ll always love you Just the way you are. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
loved it!!! Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I know...some people are like that! Too true. Well written, Patricia. ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I think I met him once! LMFO If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, I know him! He's the fellow that screams out his own name during sex! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I knew someone like this once. And once was enough! lol. Great write. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - I find it rather amazing that one doesn't even know what you mean when they are told. Sounds as if this is one of those cases. My best to you... BC |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Patricia--this was a superb bit or writing and I'm still laughing at your poem and all the responses it prompted. Please keep these coming! Shenachie |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And as your... Number one fan Your own superstar You’ll always love you Just the way you are. Yeah, Patricia, this kind of person loves themselves so much that they can't love anyone else. Sad, isn't it, to be that way? It really feels good to love other people, and that kind of person's missing it. Hugs to you, Lady Ethel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Hey Balladeer...come to think of it... LOL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write Patricia! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTFLMFO...Pat, from this point on, you may NOT hide your funny bone from us! This is so cute...and I wonder how many of us bump into your Ex every day! Kudos, my friend...big huge kuddlin' Kudos! |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Patricia, Ha ha I loved this. Cool write Mike |
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morefiah Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 150Spanish Town, Jamaica |
Hey!! You mean you were with my sisters ex too! That man does get around doesn't he? LMAO Garfield |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patricia, I'm always up for a laugh, but this was an even bigger one than I had anticipated! This was hysterical! Love your sense of humor!--in fact, I love all of your poetry! I am so happy that you joined our family! Huggums, Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Holy Crap! I knew him also! Susan |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
That dude must be getting around...surely there could not be another one like him. He is one of a kind, perhaps he loves himself so because nobody else will. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I hear they cloned this model...at this very moment a million more are being released into society...look out women of the world...the model is called "a legend in his own mind." James |
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