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nearer , be , still
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nearer , be , still |
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Canon_D_111 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 58New York USA 
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Nearer be , still , unto my soul Refrain not thy love , return unto my soul Depart not again , alone : thus nearer be , still Fade not with evens’ breeze, as dusk’s array Return as dawn, doth not delay Thus nearer be , still, unto my soul Withhold naught grievous pain Neigh release to me , that mayest taketh away Thus nearer be , still , unto my soul Allow our loves flowered day Sensuous aromas we navigate Within thy sight our lives bouquet Your butterflies alight Eden’s’ escape Nearer be , still , unto my soul Depart not again That I mayest crave honeyed savor Upon thy lips delicate flavor Would that , I pine, such sensual tone As angelic verse of love we spoke Return, thus depart not again, alone Thou sensed my being shudder and quake When times we entwined , within haven safe Refrain not thy love , thus return To nearer be , still, unto my soul … co.WPW031900 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat presentation, good write |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I appreciate the style of this, and I have a friend who I know would appreciate it also. Hopefully, this bump will cause him to see it.  I wish I knew how to do this with my work. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
not sure how I was to read this but I read one side down then the other...and enjoyed it *s M |
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