Open Poetry #26 |
Escape |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
. . . Escape Freedom from fear Take the road less travelled Imagine living life unchained To old worries, resentments, shame or guilt Explore a world of light and love Without nagging second thoughts Trust in yourself Escape . . . Chris Barker June 2003 ~~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. The words are true too. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yes!!!..Beautiful Chris... Sort of looks like a pic from 'Bridges of Madison County'.. But, you know I love these words...great rictameter. AND the new pic!!! YES!! ~Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is a rictameter magnifico! So full of meaning and import. Like your new photo! Very artistically done! You look a lot like Nancy in this one!--which is a compliment to both of you! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
loner - thankyou sweetie. Nancylee - yes, I thought it looked like "that" bridge as well. Now you've got me drifting off thinking of dreamy things. hugs & miss ya. Linda - thankyou so much for the compliments. Yes, my hair suddenly disappeared. I kind of miss it...but then again...summer's here!! Isn't it? |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous write/pic,, loved the bridge... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Exquisite work here... how much I want to escape from here to there regards sudhir |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
thanyou QjQ and Sudhir!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful suggestion... could you send instructions on how? *S* Just lovely... I like so much. *S* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Ruth. You will "feel" the instructions in your heart. Take care sweet lady. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - escape is good, it's good to feel free and uncombered... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes Bill you are right. Thankyou. hugs! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful and reflects your compassionate heart with wisdom and the truth that we can all be cleansed stepping out into the sunshine! (big hugggssssssss) I love your new picture, sweet friend, it makes you look like a deep thinker graced with the light, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your hair! Your poem! Your muse! I'm applauding all! I love 'em! I'm so happy to see you off...dreaming... of more poetry to grace the blue pages... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, this is so very beautiful. Very special, just like you are. Hugs, Ethel |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very peaceful thoughts. ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww, thankyou all my poets friends! Hugs! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! love the new pic! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks Dixie for reading and for your compliments!! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
When your nose is to the grind stone all you see is grind stone.I have had some of the most wonderful expiriences when I was totally lost.I love to embrace the unknown. paladin |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
paladin, yes, you are so right. My hubby loves to take the road less travelled, often getting us lost in the process. But, we have seen such wonderful sites this way....that we might never have otherwise. Thankyou! |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
it's never too late to escape.never |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
gyiel - thankyou for reading and commenting. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Canon_D_111 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 58New York USA |
to live without regret...the meaning of life...at least mine... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Canon, Here's to no regrets! thankyou! |
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apoetdreams Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 52NJ, USA |
This is such a beautiful poem. The picture also reminds me of The Bridges of Madison Co. and the poem fits too. I don't know if that was intentional. Either way the poem has wonderful images. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
apoetdreams - Thankyou so much for reading and enjoying my poem. No, I didn't intentionally choose the bridge pic....it just seemed to fit...although I have read Bridges of Madison County...and well, you just never know what your muse will decide upon. |
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