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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-06-10 09:12 AM



~*~
Sun-sweet strawberries,
Topped with yummy, dairy cream
On golden shortcake,
Puts a big grin on my face
And a smile in my tummy!
~*~


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1 posted 2003-06-10 09:30 AM


LOL... a smiling tummy huh.... now I have a vision of  a smilie face on the belly ..and it is winking at me as well..LOL>..

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-06-10 09:30 AM


Mann Linda - now I have to go to
the store . . . that sound sooooo
good - in many ways lol

made me smile
like you always do
thank you
xxoo

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-06-10 09:32 AM


yummy yummy for my tummy!!  love strawberries an shortkake!!!  

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-06-10 09:34 AM


And they are SO good this year!
*Of course I say that every year.*
Cute write..much enjoyed.
~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2003-06-10 09:48 AM


Yummy, yummy a bit more ON my tummy
And whatever passes by these lips
Ends up on my hips!
    

What's a few pounds between friends. Thanks for this scrumptious dessert!

Huggles, Marti

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6 posted 2003-06-10 10:01 AM


Captain ~

Not only is my "belly" "winking at" you, my eye is as well!

Mornin' hugs!
EA

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7 posted 2003-06-10 10:03 AM


littlewing ~

I love to make people smile! Thank you for yours!  

BTW, I have lots of strawberry shortcake left over! Care to join me?

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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8 posted 2003-06-10 10:05 AM


QjQ ~

You are most welcome to sample some of my homemade shortcake topped with succulent strawberries! Deeeelicious!

Mornin' hugs,
EA

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9 posted 2003-06-10 10:06 AM


Nancy ~

I've got a basket of strawberries here with your name on it!  

Hugs 'n smiles,
EA

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-06-10 10:09 AM


Marti ~

Oh, dear! I haven't checked out my hips! Now I'm afraid to look! I cannot afford to have excess baggage!--I wouldn't be able to fly!

Oh, well, "Where there's a will, there's a way!"

Come join me and a few of our PiP friends--and bring your appetite!

Huggums,
Linda

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11 posted 2003-06-10 09:13 PM




(does happy dance) Yay!!! OH MY GOSH, I LOOOOOVVVVEEEEE strawberries and cream! (kiss on cheek) You know what else tastes yummy...raspberries with white chocolate icing! (smiles) This candied poem made me hungry now, darn you, LOL, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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12 posted 2003-06-10 09:16 PM


Strawberry shortcake....yummy!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Selina
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13 posted 2003-06-10 09:40 PM


MMmmm.. yummy yummy yummy...
That sounds good.. I think I need to make some strawberry shortcake now


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14 posted 2003-06-11 01:40 AM


I am sitting here with a small dish of strawberry ygurt with sliced strawberries on it, and low and behold this poem LOL, but I like your dish way better that is for sure.  Very nice and tasty tanka.
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15 posted 2003-06-11 01:42 AM


very good! it made my mouth water
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16 posted 2003-06-11 01:48 AM


Yum-Yum....Linda, I love strawberries, with
whipped topping on top....sooooo good!!
Thanks for this yummy treat!!
hugs  
Ethel

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Earth Angel
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18 posted 2003-06-11 09:25 AM


Noah ~

Let's treat each other! I'll share my strawberry shortcake with you, and you make some white chocolate covered raspberries for me! We'll have a sweets party!

You are so delightful!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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19 posted 2003-06-11 09:26 AM


skyshine ~

Bring your appetite! I'll set a place for you at our table!

Huggums,
Ea

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20 posted 2003-06-11 09:28 AM


Selina ~

Don't bother making it! I'll make some more and you can join us!

bon apetito!
EA

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21 posted 2003-06-11 09:29 AM


Mysteria ~

That certainly was a co-winky-dink! I'll save some of the good stuff for you!

Huggums,
Linda

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22 posted 2003-06-11 09:30 AM


Foxyoasis ~

That is a very intriguing name you have!

Can't leave you out!  You must join us!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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23 posted 2003-06-11 09:32 AM


Ethel ~

It wouldn't be a party without you! Come aboard! Hope you're hungry! I just made lots more of my own special recipe shortcake!

Huggums, Sweet One,
Linda

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2003-06-11 09:33 AM


ps ~

You deserve some sweet treats! Get your sweet self over here! We'll be waiting for you!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

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