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She Could Make It On Her Own
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She Could Make It On Her Own |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Photo From Webshots ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ When he died, she was so hurt In lives together he made her feel Happy....sad Glad....angry Love.....hate Pride.......disgust Companionship....loneliness Independence....dependence Every emotion was felt at some time during years with HIM She promised herself, NEVER to marry or get involved again She didn't NEED all these emotions Something always wrong happened in past relationships, marriage She could do without mixed emotions and HURT She could make it in life all by herself Because.., She was HERSELF, and was capable She was strong Because, she loves HERSELF Then, I met YOU  [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-10-2003 05:47 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write! love the ending |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I was tingling all the way thru, cos i knew the ending already. the calm after the storm. thats your gary. i like the form you used for this one, it flowed very well, friend. ~~~~~~~~ She could make it in life all by herself Because.., She was HERSELF, and was capable She was strong Because, she loves HERSELF ~~~~~~~~ so, so true. youre an emotionally strong lady alright, with a strong loving heart to match. much love ethel mae, see u later!  gem xxxxx |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Then she wanted to feel again so she opened the door to her heart and a new love stepped in...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
This was wonderful and greatly enjoyed, great to have all that time to ourselves, no garbadge to carry around or put up with, but what is love without the company of another, so I well enjoyed the ending. Great work, love it. Sincerely Rick |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ethel~ This is nicely done~ Lovely formatting of your thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully presented Ethel.....A very creative write from all angles and very enjoyable. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! God Bless You, dearest friend, yes, true happiness ALWAYS must start with you loving yourself then sharing the love with others! (kiss on cheek) This is why I know you and Gary are going to live happily ever after, yay, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hey Ethel now throw you're hat in the air and freeze frame..um..old mary tyler moore reference..um...nevermind I'll go shut up now |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I've felt this way before, Ethel. Congratulations to you and Gary on your love, it's precious!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous write/pic/read..  good things come to lovely people...Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And there you go again...just beautiful. You're sending out those hope vibes. Patricia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel...A wonderful and uplifting poem....I'm happy for your happiness!  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beautifully conceived and written....picked me up and carried me..... ...though the opposite of love isn't hate...the opposite of love is fear.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
aww,that was such a sweet poem! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very beautiful... this progress of a life. *S* Your happiness is so deserved... and even contagious! *G* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This reminds me of a poem I wrote a long time ago...about a person who brought out my saddness, my gladdnes, and my maddness. Wonderful string of thoughts, and the ending was absolutely perfect. So pretty Ethel~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
one of your best Ethel..very very nice *s M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, for what it is worth, I am VERY impressed!!! I am so happy that Gary came into your life! You are so alive and full of joy! Loves to you both! Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
then i met you.........that says it all, ethel, you became mush.....much happiness always....... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good for you Ethel: funny . . . I feel the same only mine is still here . . . LOL at Raphs refernce - totally . . . ". . . I can make it on my own . . ." beautiful graphic ( I took it again lol) and beautiful writing - as always xxoo |
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