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Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-06-10 01:55 AM

I'm looking up
I see the sun
Refracts rainbows
in my hair they are spun
I'm looking up
I see the moon
cool man's face
bright smiling shines
through the glass in the window
I look upon and it and wonder
this cosmic web
intertwined with human fantasy
creatures all made of the same
star stuff
metoers,UFO's,black holes
I see venus in the morning
just around 4
I'm looking up
into the green
into the sky branches are reaching
I wish I could fly
I'd sit on top
I'd feel the vibes
from the Earth
the air
the unknown
I'm looking up
and feeling less alone
just sit back and listen
to Mother Earth's lessons
Are you listening?
the asnwers you seek
are within you and me

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-10 02:07 AM

very nice write/read,,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-06-10 02:45 AM

Talia:

how enlightening . . .
you know I always feel
at peace with the night . . .

awesome write
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-10 02:57 AM

nice write

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2003-06-10 06:25 AM

darkly ambiguous, i feel that i know you more each time i see your work. keep adding to my vision of you....rose.

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

5 posted 2003-06-10 07:08 AM

nice write enjoyed the read

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

6 posted 2003-06-10 01:01 PM

hi i now pic ya... this was a good read. talia know that running away will feel better everytime but it will never help you hang in there i see you soon bu buy

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

7 posted 2003-06-10 02:23 PM

well done!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

8 posted 2003-06-11 09:30 AM

I'm looking up
and feeling less alone
just sit back and listen
to Mother Earth's lessons

Nice write again! Thanks for the reminders....

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

9 posted 2003-06-11 11:05 PM

Hey thanks everyone...I really think I should have called this poem "Hippy At Heart" ...I might have to use the space **** title for something better hehe ~Talia

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

10 posted 2003-06-11 11:05 PM

Hey thanks everyone...I really think I should have called this poem "Hippy At Heart" ...I might have to use the space ship title for something better hehe ~Talia

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