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gyiel marlok
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0 posted 2003-06-09 09:14 PM


here's the rest of the poem/song


never to set foot here again
if i were to expose them
there abolishiners
would leave them fraudulent
i'm no longer apart of it
i'm glad i can return to you
to comfort me..
give me warmth from the tundra...
these buffoons know no better
they kill before killed..to slipp
from their grip
to behold what they let go
to know what they don't know
they've broken all the paths
they've beaten us half to death..
i'll come back to save you
the sun has no light
no encores here
the agony...the agony...

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gyiel marlok
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1 posted 2003-06-09 09:44 PM


to those who read this,please be frank
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-06-09 09:55 PM


i'm glad i can return to you
to comfort me..
give me warmth from the tundra...

I'm glad you added that in, if only for the sake of comfort and returning to that which brings you peace in an uncertain world.

The air was getting a little thick for sure.    
Enjoyed your dark side,  gyiel~

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