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Open Poetry #26

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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-09 04:38 PM

My eyes have yet to heal from your
magnificant light.
Scar tissue with held my tears.
There is no escape,
from a blank page,
and a pen dried of ink.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-09 04:41 PM

This is a very beautiful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-06-09 04:45 PM

There is no escape,
from a blank page,
and a pen dried of ink.

like those lines.... brought to mind a couple of ways to build on them, which I always enjoy... when someone elses words inspire me to build off them or use them in my own mind to write another version of a poem...

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-06-09 05:34 PM

liked this alot!

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