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Always Lisa
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0 posted 2003-06-09 04:17 PM


Before The Rose

The low today has got me aiming high
As sun went down and I gave way today          
A day much like the day I saw the rose.
A day where by the pine...I knelt to pray.
We once were living young and free of death.
And you and I lived fast and fancy-free
The low today has got me aiming high...
Before the rose had shown what death would be.
Now death I get but living has its lows...
I look to find the meaning in the rose.

Always Lisa, Copyright June 2002
© Copyright 2003 Always Lisa - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-06-09 04:22 PM

Nice writing...James
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-06-09 04:22 PM

This is very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart
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3 posted 2003-06-09 05:40 PM

nice
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