first ones in Critical Analysis #2 repost is here

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Open Poetry #26

first ones in Critical Analysis #2 repost is here

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-06-09 02:39 PM

The Journey

Whispers in the darkness
Calling to my heart
Dancing within my soul
The game that lover’s know

Watching beneath moonlit skies
She travelled towards my life
Gazing at me, her dark green eyes
Singing a hymn as she left my side

Still she sang
Pure, sweet and strong
Drawing me towards her home
My world faded to her own

I stumbled though that world
Moving towards my hope
Searching for her face
Somewhere in that place

There she sat alone
Singing on her throne
I settled at her side
Felt my body fill with pride

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-09 02:43 PM

This was so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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